Wedding Ceremony 101: How to write a wedding ceremony from scratch #Ceremony Advice#Wedding 101#ceremony#commitment ceremony#industry insiders#officiant#readings Updated Oct 7 2020 (Posted Oct 17 2012) Guest post by Jessie Blum Original photo by Jenny Jimenez, remixed by CC license. See Andy & Ingo's wedding full wedding here. In my first meeting with a couple, I take out this outline, talk through it, and explain the significance and meaning behind the various elements and traditions, answer lots of questions, and ask some of my own. From the basic outline, we dive into the whole world of wedding ceremonies — but having that nice firm diving board of the ceremony structure really helps to prepare and better understand where we are going. As I like to say, we can add anything in, we can take anything out. But I do find that sticking with this basic structure helps your guests "follow along" a little more easily during the ceremony, and not get lost in a non-traditional setting. When you are writing your own wedding ceremony, you need to check with your local government to see if there are any legal requirements that must be included in the ceremony itself. But, other than that, the ceremony is up to you. Take what you need, leave the rest out, this is your wedding, after all. I don't do a lot of weddings that include all of these elements — three rituals, multiple readings — but I wanted to be sure to include all of them here, so you can see where they go. The elements of this ceremony are ordered based on ritual theory. Basically, a wedding is a rite of passage, an event that marks a person's transition from one life status (single) to another (married). Rites of passages have three stages: separation, transition, and incorporation. We can see these stages reflected as we approach the life event (for example, your engagement period is one of transition, and your wedding celebration is a moment of incorporation), but can also look at what each element in the ceremony represents, and use the corresponding stage to help us order the ceremony. Related Post So you want to craft a processional… A processional is an important element of any wedding ceremony. We're creating a special moment that separates the mundane, everyday life from the extraordinary, ceremonial... Read more For Example: The processional can be seen as separation — moving away from one point of life into another. The vows are transitional — standing upon the threshold. And the declaration of marriage is incorporation — taking the new status into the everyday. By looking at each element, and deciding which stage of the rite of passage it represents, we can easily order the events within the ceremony itself. OK, enough ritual theory for now. Let's get to the outline! Photo by CINEMATICbyDavidM Welcoming of the guests The officiant enters, usually as the first person in the processional, or sneaks in from the side. This is a nice point for the officiant to introduce themselves, as well as make any announcements (Turn off cell phones? Unplugged wedding?) Related Post 5 secrets to officiating your friend's wedding I recently officiated a wedding for two of my dearest friends. I had never officiated a wedding before. It was not easy, but I'm proud... Read more Processional The entrance of the wedding party — which is a whole other post I wrote for Offbeat Bride called So you want to craft a processional… Gathering Words Presentation of the couple Family ritual Thanking of family and friends Remembrances In my intro, I welcome the couple to their wedding celebration, and like to add a few words of thanks to the person who escorted the bride or groom down the aisle — a twist on the traditional "giving away." Using the couple's own words and information, I do a special thanks for the family and friends who have joined us. This helps to create an intimate air, right from the beginning. Any special rituals or traditions that honor family would go here, such as a flower presentation for parents. If the guests are being asked to do anything during the ceremony, such as with a ring warming or a wishing stone ritual, this is also the place to introduce it, and get it started. If the couple would like to include any remembrances, this is a good place to include them. A brief moment of silence, lighting of a memorial candle, a wine toast, or just a mention of those that are no longer with us are all lovely ways to acknowledge lost loved ones. I find at this point in the ceremony, it doesn't bring down the tone very much. Related Post Is a marriage mission statement the vow alternative for you? While I adore the myriad of heartfelt, cute, humorous, serious, and geeky wedding vows I've seen all over Offbeat Bride, promises of specific behavior didn't... Read more Marriage address When I officiate a wedding, I call this section "The Love Story." I write an original narrative for my couples that talks about who they are — how they met, how they fell in love, and all of the lovely adventures that brought them to their wedding day. I end with what they love about each other, and their hopes and dreams for the future. It's funny, touching, personal, and very different with every wedding. This is a great place to include a reading, too, to have as the "center" of your ceremony. It works especially well if you can find a piece that really speaks to you and your partner. Adding some personal comments, about what the piece means to you, is a nice way to really personalize it, without having to write a lot. You could also sit down with your partner, and think about what marriage and your relationship means to you, and have your officiant share that as your marriage address. In a more traditional ceremony, this is where the sermon or homily would go. The Declaration of intent This is the "I Do!" part of a wedding. The couple faces one another, takes hands, and answers some very important questions about marriage. If you are planning on writing your own vows, it is nice to include more traditional vows here, or you can even write your own "I Do's!" Related Post 6 tricks for personalizing your vows for maximum belly laughs and soggy hankies We already know lots of ways to write your wedding vows and to get over your vow writer's block, so we're going to focus on... Read more Wine ceremony or other unity ritual. The unity rituals that represent the life that the couple will share together go here — thoroughly in transition, not yet incorporation (remember our mini-ritual theory lesson?). Wine ceremonies, presentation of gifts or flower to each other, tree plantings — there are the rituals that go at this point. Vows Either read by the couple to each other, or done "repeat after me" style with the officiant. This is another place where Offbeat Bride has a big archive of wedding vow examples. Ring vows Short ring vows are usually done "repeat after me" as the couple places the rings on each other's fingers. Note: Vows can be combined! Do you not want to talk? Just do "I Do's!" Really want the personal vows, but no repeat after me? Exchange your rings after the personal vows. This is your ceremony, and you can do whatever you want with it. Speaking of rings, GEMIST allows you to design your own custom engagement rings, and then try them on at home! Unity ritual Any unity ritual that symbolizes the couple joining their lives together goes here, towards the end. Unity candles, sand ceremonies, signing of a marriage license, to name a few. Offbeat Bride has a MASSIVE archive of unity ceremonies if you need ideas. Closing remarks A final blessing or benediction could go here as well. I like to bring back important elements or themes from the rest of the ceremony, or end with a short poem or piece of advice for the couple. If you have bubbles or rose petals or something you want guests to shower you with or do as you walk out, this is also a good place to have your officiant make a little announcement about it. Declaration of marriage The couple is pronounced MARRIED and then they kiss! Post-declaration ritual There are a few rituals that take place just after the marriage is made official — the breaking of the glass and the jumping of the broom. For ease of use, I recommend including the explanation for these rituals in the closing remarks. Recessional It's time to party! A note on readings Photo by LJM Photography Related Post Sweet, serious, and non-gaggy: a few of y'all's very favorite wedding readings about love When we're doing our wedding profiles, we noticed some trends in nontraditional readings… readings that clearly Offbeat Brides tend to adore. There are a few places for readings, either done by your officiant or a reader, scattered throughout the ceremony. It is important to find the best place that a reading fits, so look at its theme, and decide which stage it fits best and then incorporate it into that section of the ceremony. I often incorporate pieces of readings, such as quotes or selections, into the ceremony itself (I find the Gathering Words and the Closing Remarks are especially good locations). I recommend breaking up the readings, and not having guests come up, one right after another, to do a reading, and not stacking them, one right after the other, in the ceremony. Doing this provides a bit more interest, and also helps to break up the ceremony itself, so your officiant isn't just gabbing the whole time. Making ceremonies as "interactive" as possible for your guests is really important. Offbeat Bride has a great collection of wedding readings. Definitely check those out. Want even more ceremony examples and advice? Related Post Steal this super-simple wedding ceremony script We got married a few months ago, and we wrote the ceremony and vows ourselves. I wanted to share them with you guys in case any of you were looking… Read More Related Post Wedding vows for blended families: Kids say, "We do, too!" Over the years, we've seen lots of really lovely ways to include children in blended family weddings, but we've never featured the vows that were spoken. I've enlisted the help… Read More Jessie Blum Jessie Blum is a Life-Cycle Celebrant and wedding officiant. She lives in New Jersey with her husband, two cats, and growing nail polish collection. PREVIOUS An art gallery wedding with style to spare NEXT Kelsey & Meghan's classic happy-sappy wedding Show/Hide comments [ 49 ] This is so great! The man-person and I have been tossing around ideas for our ceremony lately and have realized that we were more than a little overwhelmed. Totally sharing with my officiant/BFF! Reply This is so helpful! I have been wanting to find a layout like this online, that explains everything really clearly, but have had no luck. This is perfect! Thanks!! Reply OMG I'm like EXCITED and SUPER HAPPY that you have posted this! I wrote and email not too long ago begging that this site could include something about couples who put the ceremony together from scratch, including readings! After my personal experience writing up my own entire ceremony, this information on here is exactly what is needed to put in a ceremony! (Though I had to look through a MILLION websites and my grandfather/minister's for reference.) Thank you THANK YOU for posting something that helps non-traditional couples know they don't have to have pre-set words on a paper for their ceremony, that they can make it their own. Thank you so much again for putting this up! Reply As a photographer who has worked with Jessie Blum, I can honestly say it was the most amazing ceremony I had ever heard in my career. I asked her after the ceremony to forward me the whole transcript. She is the real deal. Reply Thanks for this awesome comment, Mike 🙂 Reply Hi Jessie, I LOVE everything about this and appreciate the step by step ways to make a ceremony. We are getting married in Septemeber and one of our best friends is officiating our ceremony (his first time). He has the best personality and is super excited to do it…is there any way that you would be able to email me a sample transcript that you may have used? Reply More ritual theory talk! No, no, it's not enough for now! Reply yes, please! And thank you so much for posting this – it's just what I've been looking for! Reply Gosh, no one has ever said to me, "More ritual theory!" (and I TEACH Fundamentals of Celebrancy to new Celebrants!) I don't know if I will be exploring ritual theory any more in future blog posts, but if you are interested, I suggest reading Joseph Campbell (dense but worth it), Robert Fulghum's From Beginning to End, and Ronald Grimes (Deeply Into the Bone, though he has a few). Reply I'll check those books out. I find ritual theory (I didn't know what that is called) fascinating. Thanks. (And I would love more posts about ritual theory.) Reply Thanks for this post! We're out in the woods and wilds of ceremony writing on our own, with no religion in our lives, and having only attended a few weddings and not being really into romance novels. I'm glad we have this to navigate our ceremony even if our officiant wants us to do stuff on our own. Reply Thank you for the useful post! Ritual theory is VERY interesting to me… I too would also like to more posts about it! Reply Thanks so much for writing this- I think many couples are at a loss for where to begin planning a ceremony. I have so many questions, especially regarding incorporating two religions into one ceremony. And RITUAL THEORY!!! I love theory. More posts, please!! Reply Geeze, who knew there were all of these ritual theory nerds out there! (from one ritual-theory-nerd to another) Reply Yes that is the whole point. If one or more ceremonies can be rutualised (in theory) then great benefit will be had. Excellent observation, super article. Reply I'd like to add my voice to the chorus of excitement about this post and ritual theory! Thank you! Reply This is the clearest guide I've seen yet – I like how you've really given a template AND shown how it can be adjusted and personalized. Reply Thanks, Miss Happ. I think that is where a lot of people get lost when writing their ceremony – with the reconciliation that you can write your own ceremony BUT still follow a traditional outline. And that everything has its own place. Reply BEST post – thank you so much for this. I've been struggling with our ceremony – there are so many ideas – and this helps to steer us in a less general direction. Reply Great post, we will be creating our own ceremony and this has really given us a great starting point. As a former social anthropology student I would also love to know more about ritual theory, I'll see if I can get hold of one of those books. Nerds unite! Reply Oh I wish this post had been written before I got married. Writing the ceremony was the HARDEST part. We had some very non traditional parts (no processional) but then wanted to include the parents, and were doing traditional vows so finding a balance was extremely hard. Plus we found one absolutely perfect reading right away and then… nothing for months. Luckily we hammered it out at the last minute. It turned out awesome; most of our friends are from a theatre background and since I can never take anything seriously we managed to have everyone laughing the entire time. I guess that makes it special? Reply This is why I love Offbeat Bride: finding amazing resources such as this post to really let wedding folks take charge of their own day. Thank you for the wonderful help! Reply Thank you so much for bringing on an issue that I have been struggling with. I grew up in a strict Roman Catholic household with the concept that you get married in the church. I am now a spiritual agnostic and have been wondering how me and my fiance have a wedding ceremony that isn't based on tradition and religion. Reply Nicole, you may also want to check out this post: How do you have a wedding ceremony without a Bible? Reply Thank you 🙂 Reply If you don't plan on writing your own ceremony, look to see if there are any Celebrants in your area – we basically create and officiate at ceremonies for people of all backgrounds, traditions, and cultures. Many of my couples come from a very religious culture or background, and are the first of their family to not be married in a church. You can absolutely have an awesome ceremony without a lot of religious elements, if that is the direction that you want to go in. Best of luck with everything! Reply Oh I absolutely agree. Unfortunately we live in the 'Bible Belt' and finding an officiant who can cater to our needs are in short supply. I will probably end up writing my own, because I don't have the resources to pay for an officiant from up North just yet. Reply I am so glad that I found this! My fiancee and I are going to be working on our own ceremony and I was lost and stressing out over it. Thank you so much for providing this outline. This will make things much easier! Jessie, I wish you were in my state to officiate though! <3 Reply Sorry for the insane delay in this reply (I wasn't receiving notifications for some reason!), but thanks! So glad this was helpful. Reply Jessie, NJ is SSOOO lucky to have you!! If you are thinking about coming to Boston for your Columbus Day Weekend "Vacation" next year, let me know 😀 Reply Aww, thanks, Mary. Up until last year, I actually wouldn't charge travel charges for Boston or the North Shore bc I had a friend who lived up there, but they're moving back down to NJ. Best of luck with your wedding!! Sorry for the insane delay in this reply (I wasn't receiving notifications for some reason!). Reply THIS. IS. SO. HELPFUL. Thanks so much! My husband and I got ordained (yay, interwebs!) last year and have been honored to preside over the weddings of a couple of friends so far. I was able to piece something together that had a format similar to this, but I appreciate the details and specifics you offer. Thanks!! Reply Thanks for this post! I have been stressing about building a secular Armenian/Sri Lankan wedding with a friend officiating from scratch but this gave me an outline to start with. Now to pick readings and decide on which traditions to use. Reply Good luck, I hope it will be (or was!) awesome! Reply So, is there a link to this mysterious "other post" regarding processionals? I'm not worried about the music so much, but I wanted to know if there was another post referring to how it could be done? LOVED this post, I just outlined my ceremony with it, w00t! Reply Actually there is… http://www.eclectic-unions.com/2009/07/crafting-your-processional/ 🙂 Reply This is everything I needed! We are crafting a secular ceremony with a friend as an officiant,so this will really be helpful! Reply Good luck, Joelle! Reply Great post! Thank you so much! My very dear cousin just got engaged, and I'm helping her plan her backyard ceremony in 7 weeks so this post is perfect. Reply Currently trying to fathom our from-scratch ceremony, so this is very helpful! I want to keep it short and sweet, but not rushed. Processional, intros, poems, vows, rings, kisses, but not sure how much time to allow for these things without having all the words chosen already. I don't plan on having any particular rituals unless I can think of something that feels right to me (ring warming speaks the most to me, but I don't know). Candle lighting and sand don't really click for me so much, plus no open flames allowed in my venue. So how much time are people leaving for ceremonies? I have to put this on the invites (the reception is in a different space and we want to specify start times for both). Reply This is a great article, thank you. Reply Great information!! Getting married July 26th and working on the ceremony now. We each have boys from precious marriages, have you ever incorporated them into the ceremony? Thanks in advance!! Reply Thank you for this incredibly helpful information! Reply This is exactly what I have been looking for!! We're trying to craft our own ceremony and were having a hell of a time figuring out how it all fit together, this is perfect! Thank you so much! Reply Thank you so much for this post! This is so timely as we are also planning for our wedding which is only a month away. Civil ceremony is much easier to organise than church wedding! My cousine had many problems with church wedding. My advice – before you start to plan your wedding, study the next guide, here are some tips on organizing a civil ceremony: http://www.poptop.uk.com/events/2016/01/22/how-organize-civil-ceremony/ Reply This was so helpful for us, thank you! Knowing we wanted to craft our own ceremony was a done deal from day 1, but staring at a bank page was terrifying. This gave us some fantastic guidance and a great place to start. We had a friend marry us, so none of us were exactly experts in writing wedding ceremonies 😉 With the help we started with here hubby, officiant, and I were able to write something really special for our big day. Thank you for sharing your expertise! Reply My fiance and I are planning on signing our marriage license during the ceremony. I need ideas on how to word that. Thank you! Reply Some super helpful tips! A lot of brides ask me similar questions; I'll be pointing them to your article. Thanks for sharing! Reply Thank you for this! I just finished writing the ceremony draft for my friends, and this was a nice way to review what we had put together. I so appreciate the tone and openness that you approach each ceremonial aspect, and I'm stealing a couple words here and there. Just to share, they are doing a "unity beer" and if the venue allows, the whole room will take a sip with them (on their chosen beverages ;)) Very hipster, very them and VERY excited to be the officiant! Reply Join the conversation Cancel ReplyYour email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment. Sign me up for your offbeat awesomeness newsletter! No-drama comment policy Part of what makes the Offbeat Empire different is our commitment to civil, constructive commenting. Make sure you're familiar with our no-drama comment policy. Biz owners & wedding bloggers Please just use your real name in your comment, not your business name or blog title. Our comments are not the place to pimp your website. If you want to promote your stuff on Offbeat Bride, join us as an advertiser instead.